I've read a lot of your poems, and I have to say I like them. This poem reminds me of me, as well do a lot of your other poems. Well, keep up the good work.

Okay, you seem like my alter ego or something.

I completely know this feeling.

and its a great poem!

this one is good and it is something that i can relate to. ur poems really seem to flow together u are a great writer keep it up

great job Alex. the words flow really good, and i can so relate to this..
great work! and i'm really sorry im so slow at these reviews..
love ya!
luv Zai

I love this. If i had a cent for everytime i felt like this I'd be able to buy you credit so we could talk more. This is brilliaqnt. Great use of imagery and the emotion was expressed really well. Keep it up

Another great poem. I'm glad that FictionPress is letting people upload now, because it's a pleasure being able to read your work some more. _ I could feel the stress and weight of the world on your shoulders as I read this. The rhyme scheme appealed to me a lot this time, and the meter flowed. This is a great poem, from the basic structure to the message. Keep it up, you only get better and better. _
Aya