Reviews for My Lost Friend - FictionPress.com

Aslan Israel 2004-11-24 ch 2,	Your friend doesn't sound heartless, but maybe a little confused about life. I'm sorry you're loosing them as a friend, because I've been there, and it's not a plesant experiance. maybe you can work things out someday.
Perpetual Dreamer 2004-10-16 ch 1,	I understand the letter idea and the pure emotion that comes with it. I love the way you've written this. Keep doing it. .:dreamer:.
infamously_anonymous 2004-10-16 ch 1,	I'm not going to comment on the content of it, it's a kind of emotional piece and shouldn't be commented on as though it weren't true, weren't real. But I will say that you need to go over your grammar, I spotted a few obvious and trivial mistakes, such as, "You lied, your not here with me." The your should be you're and a few commas were missing throughout the whole piece. If you want to improve your writing you could go over and spot all the mistakes, but I think it was just that you wrote in on the spur of the moment and didn't revise, I don't think you would normally make such trivial mistakes.