Very nice. I really like the first line.

I feel the same about my sister. I love this poem.

Keep it up.

this was great too.. which one of your poems isn't? lol.. i can so relate to this, reminds me of my sis. keep it coming, can't wait to see you update soon! love ya!
luv Zai

This rocks Alex, makes me think of my own sisters. This is very well written, humour and philosophy blended flawlessly, what more can I say

That is so true. It really hits the nail on the head (I'd like to hit my sister on teh head) when it comes to sister relationships.
Kepp up the good work!
Twilight