|Reviews for A Pale Shimmer At The Side Of A Boy In Black|
| Grim Goodbye 5/9/08 . chapter 1
I really wish you would write more...why wasn't more added on?
| leaky pen 10/3/07 . chapter 1
I love the story. How come another chapter was never added on?
| Daisy Rose 3/29/06 . chapter 1
Beautiful. I was absolutely drawn in. The imagery was inspiring.
| kit feral 6/12/05 . chapter 1
I must say, I completely LOVE the title for this. It's wicked cool. And Andrew- CUTE! Lol, I have such a thing for green eyed boys wearing eyeliner. (You might want to add a little something that explains the change of view point- I got confused for a moment and thought it was all Lily and I wondered if she was a cross-dresser, lol!) Anyway, I absolutely LOVE this story. (Like all of them, really, lol.) I LOVED the last two lines. SO beautiful. I LOVE Andrew. And Lily's cool, too. Anyway, I REALLY think you should continue this. It's amazing. Please write more soon! :D
| kamma7292 4/8/05 . chapter 1
Great start! Are you ever gonna update it?
| Love Kills Slowly 2/23/05 . chapter 1
Hey, this is really good! I love the descriptions of Lily and Andy, and I really like where the story is going. You should really continue this! It may not be The Emo Boy Stories, but it's good! Update soon!
| NotSoPunk 1/18/05 . chapter 1
Wow, very cool. Write more if you feel inspired.
| Stormy Daye 12/17/04 . chapter 1
Good so far. I like the title, it's cute.
| A Perfect Sonnet 11/3/04 . chapter 1
Are you going to write more? You should write more. You -are- going to write more, right?
| NirvanaChicas 10/19/04 . chapter 1
it wasn't the sequal to emo boys, still crying, but it was very very good!
i loved it!
i cant wait to read more... i have to tell u i read a lot ... and i mean A LOT of stuff people write on fictionpress. but ur work is my favorite by far
| D L Dzioba 10/16/04 . chapter 1
Wow, Not really my kind of story usually but this is great. I love the Description of Andy and Lily. Very nice, please post some more of it soon.