I really wish you would write more...why wasn't more added on?

Great job!

I love the story. How come another chapter was never added on?

Beautiful. I was absolutely drawn in. The imagery was inspiring.

I must say, I completely LOVE the title for this. It's wicked cool. And Andrew- CUTE! Lol, I have such a thing for green eyed boys wearing eyeliner. (You might want to add a little something that explains the change of view point- I got confused for a moment and thought it was all Lily and I wondered if she was a cross-dresser, lol!) Anyway, I absolutely LOVE this story. (Like all of them, really, lol.) I LOVED the last two lines. SO beautiful. I LOVE Andrew. And Lily's cool, too. Anyway, I REALLY think you should continue this. It's amazing. Please write more soon! :D

Great start! Are you ever gonna update it?

Hey, this is really good! I love the descriptions of Lily and Andy, and I really like where the story is going. You should really continue this! It may not be The Emo Boy Stories, but it's good! Update soon!

Wow, very cool. Write more if you feel inspired.

Good so far. I like the title, it's cute.

Are you going to write more? You should write more. You -are- going to write more, right?
Pretty Please?

it wasn't the sequal to emo boys, still crying, but it was very very good!
i loved it!
i cant wait to read more... i have to tell u i read a lot ... and i mean A LOT of stuff people write on fictionpress. but ur work is my favorite by far
~Alison

Wow, Not really my kind of story usually but this is great. I love the Description of Andy and Lily. Very nice, please post some more of it soon.