 Lorki 2008-05-24 . chapter 2Hehe this is sort of cute and silly to me. The first chapter weirded me out a bit, but i like this story.
Nice job |
 Gollummullog 2006-07-05 . chapter 4Yay! I love this story! It makes me laugh. The last bit is very ominous... and then it starts talking about a dessert. That cracked me up. Hahahahha. Please update soon; I want to continue reading this. |
 MorbidCheshire 2005-10-31 . chapter 4Hey! Thanks for reviewing my story 'Stitches-' after I finally remembered I had an account here, I decided to return the favor. ^^
This is a really interesting idea- wing types forming classes, that is, as well as the general plotline. Allison and Marina are both amusing charactes, and the others are strong supporting characters too. I really like it so far, and I hope to see more. :3 |
 Luna Lapella 2005-10-06 . chapter 2Fun-ness! I'd always wanted to write a lighter story, but I'm not very good at it. They're fun to read, though, and yours is no exception. The description is good, a perfect amount of it. It's easy and enjoyable to read, so I'll definitely read the rest later. ^^ |
 temblance 2005-08-29 . chapter 4Allison and Marina are a hilarious pair, but it makes me wonder if they are going to get into some deep trouble...
Anyway, I'm glad that you updated! |
 temblance 2005-06-27 . chapter 3interesting...i've never read a story like this beofre. it was unique, and it held my attention, so i'll keep reading if you update. |
 Indubidably 2005-04-27 . chapter 3WOW! i loved this so funny..."dont insult my insults.." lol classic hehehe |
 Indubidably 2005-04-27 . chapter 1*starts laughing and dosnt stop for half an hour* im looking forward to this story. it already funny ...and...hahahahahahah..it..hahaha i loved it! lol |
 Divine Retribution 2005-02-28 . chapter 1Excellent so far - I read before but didn't review... oops sorry. anyway hope you up date real soon... any way off to the next chapter
~Divine Retribution~ |
 Tsuki Yume 2004-11-20 . chapter 2 Interesting. |
 Kitty-brdg 2004-11-18 . chapter 2cannot wait for more. I saw it updated sorry it took me two days to realize. good chapter..
bri |
 Kitty-brdg 2004-11-07 . chapter 1very interesting I must say... I like it keep on writing cause this is good so far! |
 SpaceCadet87 2004-10-17 . chapter 1interesting beginning... keep it going |