"Answer bitterness so sweet.""To cease this frozen fire."

yay for the oxymorons. I enjoy them immensely. Okay, so how do you get 15 reviews on one poem?! Now I must admit to your superiority. Murrh! This depresses me greatly

Cool! LOVE IT! You're a great author!

This was reall good. Thank you soo much for you're support and kind reviews !!

~ Noelle ~

nice job. i like the rhyming structure.

p.s.thanks for the review. =)

Neatness... I likey! ._.

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This is really good. I like your rhythm.
~A. Person

hmm, i think it could of been longer. i was really getting into it when it stopped. kinda suddenly too.
"For you I fear and desire/By my own hand help and hurt me,'
i really like those lines. the whole poem is very thought provoking
-firehair

good story. please continue. and thanks for the reveiw.
Hobbit of Doom.

lovely, the oxymorons are very well done and add a lot to the poem.

BS Pure B* S*! Just kidding! I loved it tons! Keep writing pal!
P.s.- You suck