Wow, I really liked this poem! I love that feeling of winter and snow. It's such a cheerfull time! You captured the feelings perfectly! Sorry, but I can't give you any help on your actually poetry writing as I don't write poetry I just read it. But, I love this poem! Great work! ~Erica Beth

I love the wintertime. I think it's one of the most beautiful times of the year. The snow makes everything look really wonderful. Well written ^ ^

so true
nice poem

I love this piece! It's really fantastic! Keep up the excellent work!
-Anna