  Boy From Heaven 2005-01-28 . chapter 1 wah bagus sekali...i giv u double thumbs up 4 dis story ^^...um its pretty interesting wen i read it duno y but yeah so yeah overal its really gret better dan mine! ur gud at story u shud make a living...um jst a suggestion hehehee...so buh bye
peace ^^v boy from heaven~ |
  Clarissa123 2005-01-27 . chapter 2OMG Kimmy you have to continue! So damn good man! I love it continue continue continue... i dont see this story exceeding ten chapters though (not a bad ting i repaet NOT A BAD THING) just making a statement SO GOOD |
 fizzygila 2005-01-27 . chapter 1Hey...and thanks for reviewing my poem ^^... and i did make a story but it is very short! u just scroll down abit to see it.Anywayz... WOW! Wat a nice story!! I love that the story took place in japan, and you wrote alot of details!! SO GOOD~ and err... i'll go read chapter 2 ok.. so i'll review later!
Peace out.. and why don u get on msn anymore? did u blocked me or something? i don see you at night... and tell azri to get over it... he still blocked me -_-... |
 br8kin-d-habit 2005-01-11 . chapter 2interesting. Kenji kissed Tomoe in front of the hyperprostitute? some nerve. he should be a gentlemen and do it behind close doors. still got the action goind, very good. more past about kenji, will do good for my senses...I mean knowledge.
peace,br8kin_d_habit |
| patyz 2004-11-27 . chapter 1 great...really sweet...is dis a love/hate relationship or someting like dat? |
| Julia 2004-11-23 . chapter 1 qweren..napsu lo tinGGI!huehuheuhueheuheu..=PKEPT THANGZ KOOL BEB! |
| Julia 2004-11-23 . chapter 1 qweren..napsu lo tinGGI!huehuheuhueheuheu..=PKEPT THANGZ KOOL BEB! |
| Julia 2004-11-23 . chapter 1 qweren..napsu lo tinGGI!huehuheuhueheuheu..=PKEPT THANGZ KOOL BEB! |
| Julia 2004-11-23 . chapter 1 qweren..napsu lo tinGGI!huehuheuhueheuheu..=PKEPT THANGZ KOOL BEB! |
| Julia 2004-11-23 . chapter 1 qweren..napsu lo tinGGI!huehuheuhueheuheu..=PKEPT THANGZ KOOL BEB! |
| me 2004-10-23 . chapter 1 yes! definately! continue it :D |
 Isle of View 2004-10-21 . chapter 1nice start. a little bit of errors here and there, but who cares? :) |
| br8kin-d-habit 2004-10-19 . chapter 1 OH YEAH! FEARELL...THIS IS THE BEST, ITS BETTER THAN TETRA FX. I HAD DOUBTS ABOUT THIS. BUT FTER I READ IT, ITS REALLY GOOD. YOU CAN MAKE IT BETTER BY NOT DOING WHOPS AND U KNOW. MAKE IT MORE FORMAL. I DON'T THNK OLD JAPANESE PEOPLE SAY WHOOPS. I THNK THEY SAY "KAMI SAMA" OR SOMETHING. I DONT KNOW. BUT ITS REALLY GOOD. IT REMINDS ME OF "ACROSS THE NIGHTINGALE FLOOR AND SAMURAI X." *GRIN*
PEACE,
BR8KIN_D_HABIT |
 windowbreak 2004-10-18 . chapter 1what's a flame? :S i laykee the story i mean it's not bad. continue cuz i like it and that dude was cool. i hate drunk men that person ho tried to 'ahem' her reminded me of Edgar! *shiver shiver* ugh. anyway, i want you to update cuz it's interesting. it's in japan yes? oh and also update the other story You heal my wounds, only creating more ok? cuz i really like that one! ^^- cheers |
 Nitemaire 2004-10-18 . chapter 1THAT IS SO KOOL! Please write more soon. :D |
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