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| TheDuke'sLover 2005-04-22 ch 1,  | abuseThis is so funny but at the same time it makes me want to cry. Oh where are we going? I have an idea for a poem, take it or leave it. You know Bush's nominee for UN ambassador? Only a few months ago he said that he hated the UN. Well people will say anything for power. Ironic huh?Great poem as always. Smiles,TheDuke'sLover |
| Theaphelia 2004-11-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is...just awful. Are you saying that anyone who doesn't fight in a war should be anti-war? What about people with disabilities? What about people who have a naturally rebellious personality? Are THEY cut out for the army? Does that mean they should be anti-war and anti-bush like the rest of the world? Really think about what you're saying here. |
| Mucada 2004-10-25 ch 1, | abuseI can't tell if this is a joke or not. But good rhyming. |
| JoyfullyStruggling 2004-10-23 ch 1, | abusegreat great irony and such. great way of saying it. |
| Ovaia Pelosa 2004-10-21 ch 1, | abusereview response: arrogantamerican"Don't use casualties in war to prove your point, it's disgusting, how do you sleep at night?" but i wasn't. I didn't say "An American soldier died today, so vote republican! I'm not talking about war itself, I'm talking about certain peoples twisted VIEW of the war, which most certainly deserves to be criticized. nice try though. p.s. i know you conservatives hate to hear about the military from actual military people, but i'll tell ya, i come from a military background and would NEVER criticize ANY American soldier. i will criticize morons who sit around all day eating twinkies and talking all tough about how great war is. |
| grim-dreamer 2004-10-19 ch 1, | abuseClever parody. Couldn't use punctuation though, could you? |
| Bernard Marx 2004-10-18 ch 1, | abuseI guess arrogantamerican couldn't stomach the TRUTH! Well written. I have no military experience myself, but several of my family memebers do and one of my closest friends is retired Navy. I've never heard anyone who's actually BEEN there glorify war. War is death in its rawest form, and when it's abused and taken for granted it's up to people like us to put a stop to it. The tough thing is we're up to our necks in this one and I don't see a way out. Keep up the good work... ignore the nationalist rhetoric these pinheads keep repeating. Some day they'll pull their heads out of their asses. |
| arrogantamerican 2004-10-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseDon't use casualties in war to prove your point, it's disgusting, how do you sleep at night? |