aww this is so cute!! seriously one of your best stories, but you have a lot of gramatical errors *tisk tisk*

anyway u need to finish this soon, k? cuz im gonna keep calling you until you do! and you desrcibe stuff really well! great job

Is this story officially discontinued. i hope not!

Yes, I finally read this story! I was really interested in it but I never had the time or attention span to finish it. I like it a lot, and keep up the good work!

I love it, I love it!

you haven't updated for a while and the whole WORLD can tell! UPDATE! for the sake of human kind

I really really like your story. I like your idea and i like how you write. I've noticed that you haven't updated for a long time so please please please do. i want to see where this story is going! You are a great author

i love it. i can say nothing more. i love it.

Very nice, I was hooked onto it by the first few sentence. Can't wait for more to come and keep up the awesome work Aja!

all that time waiting and only one chapter finished but leaving me at a cliffhanger how cheap hurry up and write chpt. 5 NOW! now! NOW!NAOWA!

Wow lovely. You me hiroko and aja have all written stories where a girl woke up in a hospital with no clue how they got there. Except I wrote mine (and Hiro drew it) when we were in 7th grade. Ive got it around here somewhere...

I thought it was really good, I'm sure by the time you get back to this you'll have tons of ideas to finish this, fear not, us readers and reviewers will still be here when you get back

Yay, something new. Ok, i haven't read this kind of story for awhile. Is the girl japanese or something, since she spoke it fluently? anyway, minor errors here and there, if you read carefully, but otherwise it's fine. The only cliched bit that i found was the telepathy/ voice in mind thing. Does this mean they're falling in love? or did they already did? I'll put this in my Fav. Stories, so continue writing or else.