Another great one. I really like your style.

Again, the wording is perfect. You thrust a bunch of words and ideas that ordinarily would not go together...and it makes something quite unique.

ha~i sorta get it, i thinkO_otrying to change the image by changing hair colour rite?haa~ great poem!

keep writing~

I really like the way that this sounds, especially "visions of Kodak scenery symphonies."Aspartame is disguisting but is a really cool sounding word, and your use of it here is very nice.The last line of this is very...interesting (sorry about that word). That's the best way I can think to describe it now. The overall feel of this poem is very cool (sorry about that word too) and I find it really interesting.

Do you mean comic book "strips?" Because you said "stripes..."My misspelling of "field" was an honest mistake as you'd though, and I'll guess that this one is too, unless it is, of course, a regional difference of the word used to describe comics...