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BlueNails
2008-08-17
ch 1,
abuseLMFAO
"i like his hipbones" XD
that was the cutest story I've read on fictionpress so far ^^
I hope you continue to write cause you're great at it!
deuteriuM Xtreme
2007-08-25
ch 1,
abuseEh. I thought this was pretty random. But it's good fluffy random! Especially that segment about Jun turning eighteen. ^^ He's a character worth a 'weird history teacher' obsessing over.

And I think it's nice the way you ended the story - leave it as that! Adding Jun's POV will sort of spoil the whole partially-explained goodness of it. [The last line is damn cute.]

Go random! :D
obsidiandreams
2007-01-19
ch 1,
abuseI love this story. It is amazing. It is beyond amazing. Just thought I'd let you know.
Lidyah
2007-01-13
ch 1,
abuseAw this story is hilarious. I have to admit it's nice that Jun didn't speak throughout this story - very different. But it'd be great to see a POV from him...Heh.

Nikerym 'Ksherea
2005-08-14
ch 1,
abuseokay, i absolutely adore this. it is an awesome story. i almost died when i read this line:

[Sometimes, though, I got the feeling I wasn’t angsting right.]

and the rest of it, well, i was looking for good fluff, and i found fantastically wonderful fluff. thank you, you have made my evening.

i can't believe he lasted TWO years. though the birthday, 'you're eighteen today' thing was great. as was the ending. fantastic. ::LOVE:: the teacher's mindset was absolutely hysterical, i love the klutzy awkwardness and the caffiene/coffee thing, and less than subtle hints he gave out. and the lack of angst made things terrific. okay, i must go find another synonym book (terrific, wonderful, fabulous, fantastic, great, loved, adoration, etc.)
orbicland
2005-07-19
ch 1,
abuseOh gosh. The last line is the absolute killer. The ending is so great, it really keeps true to the tone of the rest of it. I like how [through the teacher's laziness] you tell the story without so much emotions and actions as spastic thought that really gave idea to character and not just plot. Uh, yeah. I totally loved it.
Porn Yesterday
2005-07-16
ch 1,
abuseAww, so friggen adorable and cute in all of the best ways possible! The teacher was just so random in all of his awkward but sexy galore ^__^ I simply LURVE this! You are now worshipable by my rights...::bows down in front of worshipableness:: XD The only thing that'd make this SUPERCALAFRADJALISTICACSPIALADOCIOUS* would be Jun's POV for all of this, just because the kid never talked but I'm not complaining of course...because it led to better much more IMPORTANT things that involve lips too...but other naughty things too X3

Good job though and thanks! It's good to have an unexpected nice laugh in the morning...::from half awake to fully awake:: Exnay on the Coffay! Stuff tastes horrible...X__x;

Status: Greatly Sated and drowning in an ocean full of lurve, cute things, and sexier things at that!
TwistedTrance
2005-03-18
ch 1,
abuseAwesome story! So funny. ^^ Itd be cool if you did Jun's POV during this I'd like to see what hes thinking.. ^^
Shades Of Hades
2005-01-11
ch 1,
abuseoh god... if I ever became a teacher, I imagine it would turn out something like this... I'm not a hot guy though, so maybe not. ^.^ Anyways, this was fun! I very much enjoyed it.. You should write humor more often! It's all cute and stuff. lol!
Naomi Schemer
2004-12-22
ch 1,
abuseLOL! That teacher is so random! I wish I had a teacher like that!...Not really...but still. LOL, Ok, I'm off now to check more of your storys!
Pundit
2004-11-10
ch 1,
abuseBrilliant! Absolutely brilliant! I don't know the main character's _name_ and I don't even CARE! I loved it. I'm going to re-read it now. It's BRILLIANT!
Dream Fox
2004-11-09
ch 1,
abuseThis is a really sweet and adorable story! The main character is definatly adorable and it's much less sleazy then most teacher/student stories...it's actually sweet...
Ree
2004-10-19
ch 1, anon.
abuse"I like his hipbones." Ridiculously adorable and equally funny. :3 I love it.
SatisfyAnEmptyInside
2004-10-19
ch 1,
abuseI loved the ending! The whole story was just freaking adorable. I would love to read one in Jun's POV because we don't know at all what he was thinking.
subtleline
2004-10-18
ch 1,
abuseOMFG! That was...I can't even describe it! So funny! U go Jun! Now we need one from his pt of view. U kno, the plottin, and the joy over the fact that he needn't remove any clothing. Sorry...I just so demanding, but I was hilarious. I luved it.
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