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| imaRIOT 2008-04-03 ch 18,  | abuseThe storyline itself, the student/teacher relationship, isnt very originial (spelling? :D) and yet your story is my guilty pleasure! MARVELOUS! It's so different from other stories, but I'm always guessing as to what is going to happen with Finn and Kay. I LOVE IT. :D (I accidentially typed down 'you' but I thought that that would probably creep you out :D) *adds to alert lists* |
| Samana Cay 2007-12-06 ch 18, | abuseNO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO! I CAN NOT GO ON WITHOUT THIS! alright that may have been, if possible, a slight hyperbole... maybe. but im almost serious when i say this story is to me like Kay is to Finn. ah! thoughts of school! get it out get it out get it out! anyway - PLEASE continue! its such a nifty story! yes. i said NIFTY. and used many unnecessary CAPITALIZATIONS AND EXCLAMATIONS! |
| Ripper 2006-11-01 ch 18, anon. | abuseI love your story, I wish you would update more often ! |
| Alenor 2006-11-01 ch 18, | abuseoh the least she could do was to say sorry to him when she told him she took the school up on their offer. that's slightly bitchy, even if it probably is for the best. ahh well, can't wait for more, i'm glad you updated ~ Alenor. |
| j.c-chic 2006-11-01 ch 18, | abuseomgosh how frikken slack |
| Alenor 2006-06-04 ch 17, | abuseoh i really wish there was more of this, i wanted to see the ending. ahh well, cya later. |
| live-and-die 2006-01-16 ch 16, | abuseWHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE!??!?!!? i know you don't have that many reviews, but it's just because you haven't updated recently. i really really hope you update soon! it's been half a year! |
| Lilithian Rose 2005-12-20 ch 17, | abuseWhen will you have more posted or written? I can't wait to get more! |
| Goddess of the writings 2005-11-18 ch 1, | abusegreat story. keep up the good work. |
| Lonely Cupid 2005-08-05 ch 17, | abuseWhaoh... Romance-writing on the verge of some climax there! Good job! You've got me clinging to my mouse there... Whoo... So much for romance, this should be half romance-half suspense. Can't truly wait anymore... Update ASAP! As in, ASAP! Can't get enough of this! Good work! |
| Lonely Cupid 2005-08-05 ch 16, | abuseDue to my oh-so stubborness, I would like to offer an apology for my long time no review, but so far, after that great break, I read this chapter and honestly thought that you do have some cards up under your sleeves... All I can think about now is: Who took those damn pictures? That person's a meanie! Hehe:) Anyway, nice one! P.S. Hey, you don't reply to my e-mails anymore, huhuhu :( just jokin :) Hope to hear from you soon! |
| live-and-die 2005-07-27 ch 17, | abuseomg, u HAVE to update soon... this is a really original idea for a story and i just love it. although you should make your chapters longer, anyways, hope you update often. |
| Ripper de la Blackstaff 2005-07-04 ch 17, | abuseHey that's cruelty to stop there ! Come on ! Write more ! |
| DaDel Amor 2005-06-13 ch 17, | abuseWait a minute, this story (few chapter back) is different, I think. Well anyway, I like this. It's - well - it's great. |
| matts-woman 2005-06-11 ch 17, anon. | abuseFinn is the adult here, he should have been so much more careful...like not go out with her so publicily...anyways, good stuff...cannot wait for more!!I wonder if they will stick to it ? |