|Reviews for Make Me A Witness|
| Kasatriya 10/26/04 . chapter 1
Aww! This is so sad...I can relate (except it's with my mother)This is soo good!
| catseyeview 10/23/04 . chapter 1
beautiful layout, I love how you personify faith as beauty...
| poetic abortion 10/20/04 . chapter 1
That was brillant ! Beutifully crafted and written with so much emotion ! You have talent , so much so. Never stop writing !
| 6549875654987 10/19/04 . chapter 1
I love how this poem is directed to a father (as opposed to a "significant other") fathers are such an everyday occurrence, and yet, a poem about father/child relationships seem refreshingly different. kudos! I love your use of short lines to add emphasis on certain words. again, a great job.
| BloodKnives 10/18/04 . chapter 1
nice poem. i like how it is a bit confused as how u feel about ur father, or at least that is what it seems. it is good.
| simpleplan13 10/18/04 . chapter 1
beautifully written... I liek the reference to Jesus... awesome point that I can relate to.. great great poem
| Clear-Water-Jem 10/18/04 . chapter 1
I love the poem