Aww! This is so sad...I can relate (except it's with my mother)This is soo good!

beautiful layout, I love how you personify faith as beauty...

That was brillant ! Beutifully crafted and written with so much emotion ! You have talent , so much so. Never stop writing !
CBTD

I love how this poem is directed to a father (as opposed to a "significant other") fathers are such an everyday occurrence, and yet, a poem about father/child relationships seem refreshingly different. kudos! I love your use of short lines to add emphasis on certain words. again, a great job.

nice poem. i like how it is a bit confused as how u feel about ur father, or at least that is what it seems. it is good.

beautifully written... I liek the reference to Jesus... awesome point that I can relate to.. great great poem

I love the poem
signed,
Ryan