That is one beautiful piece of work. You certainly have a way with words.

perhaps the best one you wrote of the ones I read up to now ... simple language but avery appealing ...

keltica, the celtic fire from within

into the sunrise
of your eyes.
Those lines are great. Well done.:)

I love your writing style...

Oh! This is soo sweet1 I love it!

beautiful little piece, I love how the stars and moon are the sunrise, how the dark too has its light.

delightful, m.

i LOVE this...so perfectly simple and sweet. i especially like all of the imagery you used; "the sunrise of your eyes" is nice and ends the poem very well. good job :O)

very sweet. ) this could be like... a real song or something!

That was the most beutiful peace of poetry I have read all night. You truely have a gift with words.
CBTD

nice poem. i like how it is short but still good

aw so sweet!