|Reviews for Lullaby For Kayley|
| tonight we bloom 7/7/09 . chapter 1
That is one beautiful piece of work. You certainly have a way with words.
| keltica 12/3/04 . chapter 1
perhaps the best one you wrote of the ones I read up to now ... simple language but avery appealing ...
keltica, the celtic fire from within
| SilverAndFlames 11/12/04 . chapter 1
into the sunrise
of your eyes.
Those lines are great. Well done.:)
| hybridelaverna 11/2/04 . chapter 1
I love your writing style...
| Kasatriya 10/26/04 . chapter 1
Oh! This is soo sweet1 I love it!
| catseyeview 10/23/04 . chapter 1
beautiful little piece, I love how the stars and moon are the sunrise, how the dark too has its light.
| Manuel Fajar 10/23/04 . chapter 1
| PinkDaydreams 10/22/04 . chapter 1
i LOVE this...so perfectly simple and sweet. i especially like all of the imagery you used; "the sunrise of your eyes" is nice and ends the poem very well. good job :O)
| lifescrewsusall 10/21/04 . chapter 1
very sweet. ) this could be like... a real song or something!
| poetic abortion 10/19/04 . chapter 1
That was the most beutiful peace of poetry I have read all night. You truely have a gift with words.
| bloodKnives 10/18/04 . chapter 1
nice poem. i like how it is short but still good
| simpleplan13 10/18/04 . chapter 1
aw so sweet!