See? I TOLD you I'd be back.

I thought it was a lovely idea, well expressed, but something about it just...didn't click.
Still. I understand this is OLD for you. And probably isn't your BEST work.
About that...I wonder which one is your favourite? Honourshill?

Love
~unsociable

PS i realise my review really doesn't mean anything. Meh.

wonderful! seriously amazing job. i love the idea and you executed it perfectly. BRAVO!

I know you wrote this ages ago but OMIGOD I loved it! TeeHee. It was really good :]

I'm not sure this review will mean much to you, since you wrote this almost four years ago, but I've read this twice and I think it's gorgeous. It has a great, creative rhythm to it, and you just captured everything about missing someone PERFECTLY.

I really loved it. So very, very good. (:

i had never read this one before... and right now is the exact time i needed it.
thank you for writing it, its beautiful

this is a fricken awesomee poem .
i know exactly what that feels like , but i'd never be able to get it into words as you do .
beautifully written !

Incredible.
Incredibly written.
Incredibly sad.
Just. Plain. Incredible.

absolutely phenomenal!

*Glomps* ^_^ Tis tres w00ty Amu. But you forgot to add how w00ty it is when the person comes back!

Woah! I love this poem! I love how you used the same word three times on a line...Yay! Every one can relate! Yep. Routines are part of life, and life, we all have... (unless we are not really alive, LIKE VAMPIRES!!)Sry, had too much sugar, I hope you understand... ^_^

Hey! *waves* do you remember me? I remember you and your stories, so good! And this poem, my God! You've gotten way better at writing then you were before which is like, crazy b/c you were so good originally! Jeez, you are gonna be published, I swear you are.

How have you been? I've totally slacked off with writing/reading/reviewing for the past like, year. I dont know why. Well I've actually written quite a bit lately, just haven't posted anything. This summer I wrote a story and I think it actually came out really good, I just haven't posted it or anything, I don't know why. I see you've kept up with writing/posting, taht's awesome. This poem was so good, I absolutely loved it. It's SO unique like, it could very easily have been choppy because of its format, but you made it flow so well and it was just really really good, lol.

Hope you're doing well!~Beau Coeur~

If there was any internet vernacular for the very profound sadness i am feeling now, i would write it. But I'm very computer illiterate, so, clearly, i don't know how to since if I did, I would say it by now. So ... this is the best I could come up with.

*tear* *sob* *STAB* THAT is how sad i feel.

deep, dude. VERY deep.

hm, I kind of like it.
Routines is a great title. Cause that's what it is, and it shows how your routines are CHANGED when someone leaves you. Though the piece seems more for when someone has left you for good, though you've said that specifically in your summary: even when you know they're coming back. Maybe I just haven't felt that kind of attachment before. Deprived me.
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Liked all of it, the words. The structure. ( - down, - down, --, - down) The only one part is "tv" yea, the tv fits, as in, yea, people do watch tv to distract themselves. The only thing is that everything else is practically monosyllablic, but this is two. T, V. But that's it. heh. Really like it! =)

this is so sad...*soBs* but it's good =)
sounds matter-of-fact coz of the way it's written, but it pulls on the heartstrings anyway...*soB*