Everyone else has pretty much said everything there is to say about this... wow, amazing, etc... I agree in that you and this epic will become famous one day. Can't wait to read more! ~Ivy

wow...what an epic, it will take me a few reads to take it all in. I love it, it's so well written and has completely gotten my attention.

This is really good! I truly wish I could write poetry like this, but I can't rhyme to save my life...and the language and the pentameter is simply beyond me...can't wait to read more!!

Captivating and well writen. I liked it...gonna be another part? or no? Cause if not, I have to say, that's a powerful way to end it, and if not, then I say it's left alot of chances for the next part to be great. Excellent work,-Rae

loved it absolutely loved it, the flow was amazing always kept me reading on never faltered and the story behind it was very interesting that it made me want more and i couldn't pull my gaze away. really powerful and with more chapters i'm sure this will be one of the best and most famous epics in years to come, can bet my life on it:-) really enjoyed this can't wait for more, it maybe a long wait but... it's worth it especially for something this good. anyway loved it really, really did, very powerful and just amazing in a word, loved it. love you ~AllyCred~

really enjoyed this part really spoke to me for some reason. really enjoyed the flow of words and the story that you're telling, in a bloody brilliant way. lots of love ~AllyCred~

epic poem, that it is, all i can say is like *WOW*, you're an amazing writer and i see a very very bright future for you. Phenomenal doesn't do this epic justice, have to say i loved it, very brilliantly written. lots of love ~AllyCred~

oo can't wait for poem #3 to learn more about this secret! Very nicely done...I possibly picked up on some symbolism in this poem(?)...not sure if that's what it was though...till next review,
-Rae

^^ wonderful poem! I was not disapointed when I chose to read this one! Intreguing it is, and I have to say I'm hooked...*nods* I have to say you have a way with words and poems. Good job!
-Rae