good job, short, to the point, and lots of emotion, keep up the good stuff

wow, depressing, short, but to the point and full of emotion. the best words are those left unspoken, yet still heard by all willing to hear. nice work. hope u start writing again soon, you have talent!
The King of the Assclowns

Wow. I really like the format of this poem: Short and to the point. You don't have to drag on because you express everything needed right there.