Ahh this is really good, have you just written the words or do you have a melody to go with it? :)

This really reminds me of Lover I Dont Have to Love by Bright Eyes.

no idea why :P have you heard that song? :D

What a creative way to use the "Narc" lyrics!

"Here's to Interpol and eyeliner in my half of the bedroom

And vodka and confusion in our veins"

God, I love those lines. Keep writing. -

This song/poem is just haunting. I can only imagine what it would sound like and I'm positive it sounds better than what my mind's coming up with. I love it.

This was beautiful. I'd stay if someone wrote anything like this for me.

This was truly amazing stuff.

There's just something about your work that makes you just so... whoa.

Maybe its the little things. Possibly. I can't pick it out.

Well, you already know I love this song. It's just so... I don't know... well, anyway, I love it. Especially the lines "I want you to know that I didn't sleep at all last night
I want you to know that neither of us were as drunk as we pretended last night". On to favorites. I just love this. And Coner... :D This is such a perfect song and if it was to music (do you have it to music?) and I heard it, I'd totally play it over and over and over and... well you get the idea. Amazing, amazing, amazing.