| Reviews for Slumber |
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Siberia82 1/8/05 . chapter 1Simple, but beautiful. Bravo! |
fatalkaiser 1/3/05 . chapter 1I liked it. Most Haikus just look like the words were thrown together and left to fend for themselves but yours was simple and got the point accross. Well done. |
simpleplan13 1/2/05 . chapter 1i liek it.. especially that last line |
Gracie Lou Freebush 1/1/05 . chapter 1Great haiku! Perfect number of syllables and nice word choice. If only I could get enough sleep myself! |
Manuel Fajar 1/1/05 . chapter 1In another world, Mind finds—Time—to heal itself, Start each day anew. —m— |
David Stephen 1/1/05 . chapter 1Absolute genius! DS |
Tipped 10/30/04 . chapter 1AW! its so cute! thanx for your reviews (the first i had gotten in a long time), sorry i couldn't get back sooner. This is great, love it! |
Miz E. Mak 10/22/04 . chapter 1Cool poem... I have also written something about sleep/dreams recently (not in haiku though). Its so refreshing to read this haiku. I wish I could curl up in my bed and go to dreamland... write on. |