|Reviews for Slumber|
| Siberia82 1/8/05 . chapter 1
Simple, but beautiful. Bravo!
| fatalkaiser 1/3/05 . chapter 1
I liked it. Most Haikus just look like the words were thrown together and left to fend for themselves but yours was simple and got the point accross. Well done.
| simpleplan13 1/2/05 . chapter 1
i liek it.. especially that last line
| Gracie Lou Freebush 1/1/05 . chapter 1
Great haiku! Perfect number of syllables and nice word choice. If only I could get enough sleep myself!
| Manuel Fajar 1/1/05 . chapter 1
In another world,
Mind finds—Time—to heal itself,
Start each day anew. —m—
| David Stephen 1/1/05 . chapter 1
Absolute genius! DS
| Tipped 10/30/04 . chapter 1
AW! its so cute! thanx for your reviews (the first i had gotten in a long time), sorry i couldn't get back sooner. This is great, love it!
| Miz E. Mak 10/22/04 . chapter 1
Cool poem... I have also written something about sleep/dreams recently (not in haiku though). Its so refreshing to read this haiku. I wish I could curl up in my bed and go to dreamland...