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| doubleellipsis 2004-11-03 ch 1,  | abuseI love the role that eyes play in this poem, how glances cause knees to bleed and hurt the soul with mere glances. Another possible title for this poem could be "Remorse," the anguish of a break-up is so clear and gripping in this poem. Great job. |