Wow...I really enjoyed this story. The characters are human and I feel like I can relate to them in one way or another. Some errors but it's alright. Please continue on to chapter six. *adds to favorites and alert list

oo-er... This is way cool! This is really getting good now. not that it wasn't good to begin with but now it's getting better. so keep going, i'm looking forward to the next chappy!

Ooh what is it? Keep going!

Another fabity fab fab chapter! I'm absolutely loving this story so update ASAP!

Awesome, mate. Bloody awesome. This isn't like your regular style of writing, which is good. Gives the writer a fresh new way of doing things. I want to know more about this one. -Hugs n snugs- Tata, pet.

Perhaps you should seperate the bits she's remembering from when she's talking to David because if you hadn't already told me what you were doing thn i wouldn't have understood what was going on. Other than that it was really good. i'm enjoying this so keep it up!

Hiya! I know i said before that this was boss but i thought i'd review anyway because it's always nice to get reviews. Anyway just so you know if i could be bothered to get an account on this then this story would totally go on my favorites list. If you upadate this week (which you better had do) then email me so i know. And make sure you stick to this story!

I really like this. A lot. I like how it's in her friend's point-of-view... I like how you've described her with simple words. Catching. It's going on my favorites, even though there's only a first chapter. I will msot definitely read more.
much love
vintage fade