This is very well written. I really like the concept here and I agree. People are never completely candid in life. Keep writing!

You have written this beautifuly.I like it.

hey, very nice poem and you're only 13. it was a very mature insight and yeah. about my story, i think i will stuff it up if i change poV.. more sympathy/empathy for the female character and i prolly will in few weeks when i have the time:)

hey dude... you alright? you'll get the hint i spose... besides, who else frequently checks your stuff? =)
you wanna talk about anything? umz... it's cool... like the repetivivness of the first two lines of each stanza =) [thought that i should do a proper review!] umz... that email you were talking about? =) *hint hint* stop watching whatever movie you're watching and ignoring people with!