really good! I enjoyed the idea and the poem. I like banana-flavored things but not bananas themselves. keep up the good work!!

Not to sound like a beatnick or the kind of person who uses the word beatnick:that was... intense.
I'd forgotten how good your stuff is.
Stones decay, words last
Nick

i like it. don't really understand it, but i like it anyway. good ending... the nothing at my fingertips anymore part really brings it full circle, but how you ended with two more lines after that leaves the reader hanging quite happily.

oh...i love this...i especially like the ending for some reason and the line "Rumors spreading about the skeleton in the backyard"...*cough* im not insane...anyways, this is really great.
xoxo Rachel