I really like this, the anguish is so intense and real. The questions in the chorus are especially powerful. Great job.

Once again wicked Awsome! it was hauntingly impressive and the first verse was really good.Someday you'll suffer through all my painSomeday they'll find you rotting, slain that was my favprite part. keep it up.

Great poem, the feeling in it is deep and meaningful. I really get where you're coming from.
-EarthTouch

I like it. You caught the depressed mood wonderfully.

that was fricken amazing! you know that right? i hope so dammit! wow, i wish my songs would turn out this good :P. again, amazing work as always and forever keep writing ;)

AW! OF COURSE I'D CRY! i wouldn't be able to stop crying... **hugses** you ain't goin nowhere missie.
(btw, am very glad you came out wiht a new poem... i have no time to read all your stories... i have them all printed off and i try to read them in my spare time) YOU ROCK SUGAR!

If I ceased to breath again, would you weep for me?... breathe
very sad and creepy.. ncie rhyming too!

Finally! I've been trying to review this but errors kept popping up.
This is great! I know this feeling, I think about it, whether my friends would miss me if I died, or feel bad or anything, more often than I probably should. I love it. Your word usage was excellent and overall it was just a marvelous song.
luved it!
-Tipped-
ps- if you have the time, I'd really appreciate it if you could review me. Thank you!

Great song! I love the theme and the line.
If I ceased to breathe again, would you weep for me.
I'm actually suprised (and very happy) that F/P let me review this!

Very good song! I wish I could write like this again . . . bloody brilliant job here.