So beautiful.

Beautiful. Lovely expression and excellent poetic craftsmanship. Truly you have expressed yourself well in this piece.

Oh, and how are you doing? I decided to drop by and cheer up some of my old friends. ^_^ Fictionpress is truly the home of my heart's spoken word. And good old friends like you make it that way. Keep writing, and remember all you have to do is e-mail me if you need a review, advice, whatever.

I really liked the imagery here. Very sad and dark, empty. I really like your writing!

OMG! That is so beautiful and dreary at the same time. You are just awesome. I know I haven't posted lately but I am meaning to soon because I've been writing a lot of stuff, so when I do I would love it if you could R&R for me... AHH! What can I say, I'm speechless, it's pure perfection! Have a good one... *K

I love this, it's sad but I love it. I like the way you use repetition in this and the imagery you used. Great job, Loves,
Bethy