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The Mango Tango
2008-07-16
ch 17,
abusewow, i dont know what to say, this chapter almostt made me cry T.T lol but hey, thats what makes a story a good story. haha but yeah love it (: trying to finish this al in one day
Emtec
2008-06-16
ch 21,
abuseI started reading this and i couldn't stop! It isn't healthy, you know?
I really liked your story... screw that, i've loved it! I've actually laughed out loud countless of times, so thank you for that! Twenty chapters and i feel like i've known your characters all my life, like i am Sinjun or Monique... that real they've become to me.
So, congratulations! Your story rocks!
Looking forward to reading more of you...
Lily Laurence
2008-05-25
ch 21,
abuseBeautiful story. kept me wanting more till the very end. keep writing!
misssweetsweet
2008-04-03
ch 1,
abuseVery interesting story. Unfortunately, it is incredibly difficult to read due to the fact that there are NO QUOTATION MARKS! I am having to read a sentence twice in order to find the actual dialogue and separate it from the thoughts. You should seriously go back and re-format your story. Also, did you have this story beta'ed at all? If you had, the quotation marks problem wouldn't have been a problem. Other than that, good job.
HeatherLee
2008-03-04
ch 21,
abusereally really really good story. when i read the part about adrienne wanting to "eat her toes" and then her feet, i couldnt stop laughing but later when i tried to tell my boyfriend i was literally in tears. it was so incredibly amusing. there were a few loose ends you didnt tie up. for instance, did lindsey still blame adrienne for the drink thing? what exactly did dylans sculpture look like? i wanted him to evenutally find out that she kept that sketch he did and didnt use it or need it for a class. anyway, this story was incredible and you did a wicked good job. continue to write in the future!!
atreyu love
2008-01-27
ch 21,
abusehaha.
if a guy did that to me, the ** part on his forehead,
oh man, id MAYBE forgive him. hilarious :)
and its really funny when she kicks him and
he still tells her that he loves her, real love right there :D haha. i loved the story!
cherrystraw
2008-01-05
ch 21,
abusereally good!
though i think the ending (mainly the last chapter #20) was a bit rushed.
still really good though
i hope you write more!
Phantasia.89
2008-01-05
ch 20,
abuseI was just wondering about your references to galatea & pygmalion. You called Adrienne pygmalion, and dylan galatea. But isn't pygmalion the sculptor-king who fell in love with his statue (galatea) that was then brought to life by aphrodite? So the references seem a bit backward to me... but I don't know...
Phantasia.89
2008-01-04
ch 15,
abuseThis is a brilliant story! Character development & the progression of Adrienne & Dylan's romance is perfect. This must be the 3rd time I'm reading this, it's just that good : )
DSLuverGurl123
2007-12-29
ch 21,
abuseOh my goodness. That was amazing. It brought tears to my eyes. I really felt as if I knew her and...you are an amazing author. Words cannot describe my deep appreciation for your work. Amazing. Thank you for sharing you talent.

-Katherine
Stahlut
2007-12-27
ch 21,
abusethis story wa sincredibly feel good. and I love dit, and the ending was great. it wasnt ove the top at all, which was absolutley great. and well the chracters were awesome. and it was nice to have the leading lady be someone other then a nerd. so yeah I really loved it.
A.realistic.romantic
2007-12-23
ch 21,
abuseI loved the story, especially because i could identify with the main character in certain aspects. I liked how you managed to make basically everyone have multiple facets to their personalities. I can't stand one sidedness in main characters.
I really enjoyed it :)
YoungInside
2007-12-16
ch 21,
abuseThis is a great story but I can't help but think that their reconcillation would have been much better.
justalilcrazy
2007-12-15
ch 21,
abusegreat story!
SeatNumber3NYC
2007-12-08
ch 21,
abuseI absolutely loved it!
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