Aw...

argh! i luvv sailor moon! and dont get me started on tuxedo mask. LOL. like the stori!

an absolute fantastic read!:D i love the way you made the girl as the spoiled brat instead of the usual. well done.:D

Fact of Life One: I DO have a boyfriend.

We just haven’t met each other yet.


That was the best thing I've ever heard in my life haha.

Love it! I especially like how you've made the usually spoilt-brat-rich girl the protagonist, and managed to get people to like her.

Ri

Hi there!
I just finished reading your story, and I must say, I added it to my favorites. It was definitely awesome. The characters are flawed enough to be realistic, and the plot isn't boring at all (I love the betrayal/forgiveness themes). Also, even if at first I was a little put out by the writing style, which is a little formal, once I got into the story it didn't matter anymore. So basically, full points for you.
Thanks a lot for writing such quality fic, and I hope I'll read more from you soon =)
Keep it up!

AranaBanana

lovely story! :)

you are a reall grreat writer
you now leave me speechless

loved it. so funny

hi i just wanted to say that you should add quotation marks when someone is speaking because it makes it easier to read

Alright I like this story but you're missing quotation marks all over the place. It akes it hard to understand when they're saying something and when they're thinking it, and although the spaces are making it easier on the reader they just aren't going to cut it.

i remember reading this story a while back. i just don't remember the plot itself. re-reading it as of now and maybe i'll add you to my fav author's list

hey, great story, but could you please put in quotations when they talk? It gets kind of confusing.
Again, love the story.
~chaos.into.shadow

Not to sound rude...but would it kill you to add qoutation marks? I mean you had them for the first couple chapters...but then you stopped...and it's mildly aggravating to have to strain to descern what is actually being spoken from the action/thoughts...just a little tidbit of constructive criticism...but, you seriously should add them. It will make you story a much more enjoyable read.

hey!! i read this like hundred times? anyways.. always wanted to ask you about the two elfin figures that dylan sculpted.. the couple one which he gave the female one to lindsay? so did adienne have the original?