Beautiful. Love the referace to Delilah. really captivating. Brava!

Hmm... I am for once lost for words, you have out done yourself, really. My God... *wipes tears from eyes* this is really poassionate, je l'adore!! Je l'adore! *weeps some more*

Love,

Anna

Nice poem, well done, it makes me feel like the guy watching her fall away down a black pit. authough on the 5th paragraph the last two lines, i had to reread to understand, so you may wish to examine and evaluate. byes

Well written, kept my attention the whole way through and was very descriptive, very enjoyable. Congrats on all the reviews on your stuff, all well deserved, and its good to see so many people reading your stuff ^_^.-Rae

woh.i just got drawn in to this poem.very dep and mysterious.excellent description.i can really see her falling.

That was cool. In a way it makes me think of an art movie type thing, with lots of black and dark red.

i loved this poem, it was so deep and had the air of mystery to it. i love the ryhme and i loved the way you captured her falling so deep. loved it.
lots of love
AllyCred
P.S thanks for the reviews. appreciate it alot.

I loved it! The rhymes were awesome. One question..was there a reason why you capitalized "Nightmare Steed"? *Great job and keep on writing! ^^