i can see how ths reflects the period of your life. this poem shows your confusion and anger [possibly?]. I absoltley agree, marriage should be for life, and not just the wedding.

great song. i mean, it has a meaning. and THAT's important. congrats ;-))

fantastico

love itgood goodkeep it up

I totally agree! Marriage isn't something one can just throw away. Nice poem, but it's a bit plain. Make it longer and add emotion, and I think it would be much better. But overall, I think it's pretty good.

Good job! It was very simple and rather plain however...I think you might want to make it longer...it would help me to get more feelings/emotions out of it. Otherwise, very good job...I like your choice of words.

This is really sweet and beautiful. The summary makes it...sort of innocently sarcastic (not a very good description) and very sad.
-God bless-

I totally agree with you. Marriage is the greatest act and covenant of love that two people can make. Excellent work!

I think that this poem embodies feelings that many people go through when their parents divorce.

OMG!! I wish my parents would read this poem! Then they might understand what im saying!

This is a good poem ya gots here. It is so very true as well. So true. People don't even see it that way anymore.
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Nice poem you got there.
-Tears of a Lonely Soul

Call me old-fashioned, but I feel really sad seeing people get married, thinking "well if it doesn't work out, we can always get a divorce."

That was so pretty! I think I am gonna cry! *cries for 5 minutes* that is so true. today marriage is something that can just stop, when it shouldn't. People that leave their spouse are (in my opinian) cold hearted. Well, maybe not all of them. Anyway, I hate to ask this but please review my story, its name is the same as my pen name. I would be happy. Your poem rules!

It was cool! I was wondering if you can review my story called Earth is under attack. The chapter are not in the right order but it does have a prologue. Thanks!

Bye

Excellent poem. Marriage really isn't about the fluff and it's much more serious than most people make it out to be. So much for conjugal felicity, eh?