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| wee-rebz 2006-02-02 ch 1,  | abuseexcellent. i like this. really...thoughtful. i think the change in the second stanza is great. And it implies the way a relationship can end, very well...just fading away til there's nothing much left. btw...are you northern irish? I saw a review u had left about flip flops!!?? Im from belfast! |