this was really nice i really liked the flow and the imagery you have portrayed here. lots of love ~AllyCred~

Hee hee. Sounds a bit ironic, but that what's makes me like it. It seems to be deep, but simple too, as in well... you just love him. Great and pretty work.

i like it. you're looking up and thinking all these deep poetic thoughts about the stars connecting people, and you know he's not the kind of guy that would do that, you know that you and him are so different, and you love him for it. KInda makes me think about the guy I love, because he's like my complete opposite, and not at all what I think of as "my type" but I love him, and he loves me, even though we're so very different... Sweet poem, I really like it.

This is great, really pretty and romantic, I hope that doesn't put a damper on the review now, I know some writers would hate to have their work called pretty.
Cant wait for the next part of Aithne
Keep it up
Keith Andrew

Lol the first bit reminds me of that American Tale film with the two mice looking at the moon together but apart and singing. Anyway very good, its so pretty :) Well done.