 sunerayne 2006-04-09 . chapter 11dude, it's been forever since i've been on here ^^ anywho i abso-tively LOVE this poemit speaks out to meh...
the only problem i have is that one line, 'What kind of actives do you do?' is it suppose to be actives or 'activities'? *shrugs* it just kind of sounds funny to me but that's me!
did you write this poem because this is how you think you are? oi, you're not a Loner because you have me or...you don't love me anymore? ;^;but if this poem's not about how you think you are then...don't pay attention to what i just wrote ^^
oh! i spotted something else, the last two 'Drifting way...'s has no 'a' in front of 'way' and i'm wondering if you did that on purpose...*shrugs*
this is the longest review i've ever written...^^and thanks for your comments to 'Isn't it Okay?' and 'Little Secret' (forgot to say thanks) you make me glow with warmth =D it must be the best comments you've ever given to me...i think...*shrugs again*
keep on writing and don't procrastinate like i do! (and i wanna see some of your short stories or long stories and i don't care if you think they suck! i'll assist =D) |
 white-clouds 2005-12-18 . chapter 10Oh, poor froggy! Haha...that was good! |
 white-clouds 2005-10-26 . chapter 9Hmm...beautiful. Yeah. Beautiful. |
 white-clouds 2005-06-24 . chapter 8Heh, you made me feel like I was deep in the jungle alone trying to find a way out. Okay, that was the total opposite of what your poem meant. You haven't been updating in a while. Do keep writing! |
 dark88poet 2005-06-19 . chapter 3Your a really good writer and have a nice way of conveying emotions in your writing. I especially like The Horror of the Dark and Confusing.
also I'd like to thank you for the review you left me for Labeling. I COMPLETLY agree with you. I love that name you gave those people at your school, the snots. Most likely Very fitting.
have a nice day dark88poet |
 white-clouds 2005-02-26 . chapter 7Very nice and simple |
 white-clouds 2005-01-16 . chapter 6Brilliant piece. |
 white-clouds 2004-12-27 . chapter 5Cute! I can hear the birds in my head...
Happy New Year 2005! |
 NomadicWriter 2004-11-26 . chapter 4YAY! *claps* Loved them all, average day is soo true! Confusing is great and im glad that i inspired that ^_^ *dances around like an idiot* okay i think you know that i like it. *does a little bow and exits* yes me is very crazy. -Kate xoxo |
 sunerayne 2004-11-26 . chapter 1very poeticy or however u pronounce it ^^ anywho good job! can't wait for u to write some more! |
 white-clouds 2004-10-23 . chapter 1Your welcome for the reviews:) I just love your work! I like your haiku. It is quite scary if you read it at night lol But anyway, I think you did a great job. I'm looking forward to read more of your work!
~Lara:)
p/s: Can you review me too? Heh heh |
 Toph Gonzalez 2004-10-21 . chapter 1Oh, creepy imagery... I like! |