   Elizabeth Bilberry 2006-09-21 . chapter 1I love how so much can be expressed in only three lines.
EB |
 s m e l l . o f . r a i n 2005-10-21 . chapter 1♥ |
 Raivyn 2005-10-02 . chapter 1I rarely find much meaning in Haikus, but this is great! I love inspiration. Isn't it just the most wonderful feeling!?! |
 black*tears*of*innocence 2005-07-19 . chapter 1short...sweet...to the point...very wonderful. keep up the good work!~davida |
 shinco 2005-07-15 . chapter 1Nice Haiku! Is this your first? It was great! ^_^ My first Haiku was "Winds of Flight"! ^_^ Very nice! |
 CyberBird 2005-07-14 . chapter 1beautiful ^-^ that's all I can say, awesome job |
 Rae's Shadow Angel 2005-06-17 . chapter 1hm...a good haiku is a rare find. Exemplary. |
 Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-06-09 . chapter 160 reviews?! im gonna stop doing that too, lol. a nice haiku. im not really a haiku fan myself but its a nice little poem. short and to the point. ;) |
 Osunale 2005-05-30 . chapter 1Not bad, not bad at all. |
 Leeona Trance 2005-05-26 . chapter 1I can almost touch it... Beautiful.
~Leeona Trance |
 Kelpylion 2005-05-25 . chapter 1who hasn't had this experience?vivid imagery. |
 LauraKM 2005-05-23 . chapter 1Brillinat,this is great, so simple but beutifully so, great job. |
 Moonjava 2005-05-21 . chapter 1Very much straight to the point but I like it. |
 daphnegray78 2005-05-17 . chapter 1Wow. I love this! What an awesome way to describe it. Well done!! ^_^
~Daphne~ |
 we share our blanket with owls 2005-05-16 . chapter 1Oh, wow, that was pretty! I love when inspirtation happens, dont you? I always get inspired for poetry (usally hikus) when I'm trying to sleep, lol. It's not fun, but they usually turn out good so I don't mind. Anyway, I really liked this. It was so pretty. Great work, keep writing! :D |
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