Yay! Nice story. I'm reviewing on the library's computer!

wow...GREAT imagery.. please please continue!!

Holy COW! Where's the rest of this? I love it!

The descriptions you have are amazing, and not at all boring to listen to! You have an amazing attention to detail! I could feel what's-her-face's pain, her wonder, her excitement! Er, I hope it's a her...

Anyways, I'm adding the beautiful story to my favorites! And I'll go check to see if you have any other stories... ^_^ Ta!