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| Valiant Century 2006-03-04 ch 1,  | abuseit makes perfect sence to me and i only had to read it once, the hunter eh? |
| Kitty Ryan 2004-11-05 ch 1, | abuseJust...a fantastic outpouring of language. I was transfixed. This is a review entirely lacking in constructive critique, but in my current state of mind any attempts would be complete rubbish anyway. Gorgeous. |
| Aimee Raven 2004-10-22 ch 1, | abuseOh...me likes this ALOT! Honestly! It's different from any other poem but I know what the string of consciousness thing is like and I adore this! Everything is jumbled up and gives the impression you're running breathless and the end is really good too...every verse has it's own meaning and image and I love that! Wow...keep writing stuff like this! Love, Mia |