it makes perfect sence to me and i only had to read it once, the hunter eh?

Just...a fantastic outpouring of language. I was transfixed. This is a review entirely lacking in constructive critique, but in my current state of mind any attempts would be complete rubbish anyway. Gorgeous.

Oh...me likes this ALOT! Honestly! It's different from any other poem but I know what the string of consciousness thing is like and I adore this! Everything is jumbled up and gives the impression you're running breathless and the end is really good too...every verse has it's own meaning and image and I love that! Wow...keep writing stuff like this! Love, Mia