wow.. that's... powerful.

remember...life is depressing...only a true friend as a child...grow to indulge in its sorrows...only for life to kill you from blunt force trauma to the aching soul

NICE!

very good again. great job on this dark poem. one spelling error "Feeing" is supposed to be, "Feeling" I think. anyways, great poem.!

nice..kinda has a ..double meaning...kepp it up

hey, it's.. well you know...

Hmm...I'm not really into cutting poems but this one is different...has a message and I like it :). The last stanza is really good. Keep writing! Love, Mia