hmif onli i could seperate the charaters...not ur fault i just have a bad things with names...yeahwell great chapi! updates are mi friends but its kewl if u dun. i dun have time aniwais!heheh no deprive high skool stundent. sigh* u know the

Write more! Write more! God, I love this fic! Poor Hitomi has an ass for a cousin! I really like the way you actually took the time to set up the plot and introduce everyone, rather than just throwing it all together and tossing the reader into the story. It's very much like real life, where people are introduced at different times and opinions are formed over time when the person finds out more about other people(if what I just said makes any sense). Um...ya, so, keep it up!

i kinda like ryou... but you seem to favor kei so... not sure if i wanna continue reading this or not.. great story though, keep it up. ja.

omg I'm definetly lovin this story! I can't wait to read the next chapter! lol I can totally relate to her! its crazy! lol except mine is a crazy best friend instead of a cousin and my parents (as annoying as they may be at times, lol) are still around, lol that and I live in Canada.. anyways now that you've heard a brief insight into my life during my ramblings, I'm going to let you go so that you can start typing the next chapter! _ Your Pal,
MegumiReisui

Intresting, I wonder wt he is thinking

0_0 KEWLNESS UPATES?

hehe another great chapie!

wow the update verison so RULES! rox mi bunni socks! upates are LOVED bi ME!
peace

This is great! I like this one better then the old one, don't know why though. Keep up the good work!

I like this revised version much better, good jobwith it!

Pure bliss! I love how this story's going! Keep it up _
Ichigo

Whoohoo! You're god! Love this story... I enjoy watching Shin-chan!
He's sort of like a grown-up crayon Shin-chan _
Keep it up!
Ichigo

Wow! That was quick! Anyway, that was another good chapter.
Good luck with the next chapter!
juu

I like this version better than the last one. Hitom's clothes also seem more casual than the ones she wore in the last version.
:thumbs up: Good luck with the next chapter!
juu

this is much better that teh first one..keep it up. lolz_