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| farawayfromthis 2007-10-17 ch 35, | abusei really liked the story but i have a few points to make firstly - it took me ages to realise that the story was set in Singapore. I also still don't know the backgrounds or appearances of you or any of your friends. I think this is because you were basing them on people in real life, so you didn't have to think of new characters, and just forgot and assumed that we knew them secondly - it seemed too perfect. each one of the girls ended up with an NZ guy... it just worked too well. Sure, josh turned out to be a piece of scum... but i just think that you, i don't know, could have done something differently 3. there was no 'shock' thing in the middle. maybe this isn't always needed, but i just found the story was sort of bland at times with all that said, i must commend you - it was a brilliant story. thank you for unboring-ifying my afternoon =D x ju |
| troryfan3007 2006-12-12 ch 8, | abuseThis is a really great story! Luv it! |
| miss-ellen 2006-01-23 ch 2, | abusehm... and I assume you have it on good authority that Kiwi blokes are hot and wonderful/charming/nice? I've lived there all my life and trust me hot guys are rare unless you're in Wellington and very few are actually nice [well actually I know quite alot of nice guys here but most of them are 18+ except for two guys in my class(both 15) but most teenaged guys in New Zealand are pervy little ** who'd much rather grope you then actually apologise for something you did]Trust me, I speak from experience. |
| zzaku 2005-04-15 ch 1, | abuseWooah.. hahax! This is really good. I still have problems adjusting to your style of diving in without introductions. But the whole idea is quite fun! And I loved the "guys were usually too short, too nerdy, too young, too stupid or just too... bleh." hahahax! Nicee~ |
| Citharia 2005-03-17 ch 35, | abuseThat was so sweet!! And hilarious at the same time... somehow...I like the word "omicrud" now...for some weird reason... Stephen seems like a sweetie...and I can totally relate to the girl's school thing...seeing how I'm in one myself...currently...haha And I like that guy with the italian accent, he seems hilarious!! :D A+ in my books...though the ending was sad... :( why oh why did they have to go?? Oh well...haha |
| rock 'n' roll junkie 2005-02-20 ch 35, | abuseAww, loved this story! Adored it. It's late and I'm tired so me go to bed. Lookin' forward to seeing more of your stories! |
| rock 'n' roll junkie 2005-02-20 ch 16, | abuseI love your stories and your friend, Bel's. I just read Bel's, tis wonderfullers! Yours is too! Stephen intrigues me...sorta mysterious in a sexy way. lol, love it. Keep up the great work! |
| jointedlegs 2004-12-30 ch 35, anon. | abuseAwesome. Three cheers for Kix and her story! Hip hip...hurrah! """" Haha. TOo lazy to type everything out. Okay great GREAT job on finishing it! (i doubt i'll finish mine! eeps!) Aww no snog-fest. :( lol. OKay gj! |
| pinewarrior 2004-12-20 ch 35, anon. | abuseTHAT'S SO SWET! *sighs happily* |
| pinewarrior 2004-12-19 ch 1, anon. | abusei come from nz! it's the best! |
| Annah A-bomb 2004-12-17 ch 35, | abuseThat's so sweet! |
| philoslove 2004-12-17 ch 35, | abuseDo you know that... Kel gave me a notebook too, for all my poems and stories or it can also be used as a journal? Gosh. How prophetic. Yup, I agree with Khine Mon; The Malarkey thing. Muahahahaha. There ought to be some enemy. Life isn't a bed of roses. Why don't have other NZ people or us scoolmates one? Hahahahaha, Hitler's niece... Assuming that YOU are her? hehehe, NO! No lah, just kidding. I thought there could be more focus on the Josh/Jan issue, and more focus on him definitely. |
| Isle of View 2004-12-16 ch 35, | abuseEE! He gave you Hitler's niece! Ok, not the niece herself, I mean, if he gave you her niece, you'll scream! But can I borrow it( I mean the book, not the niece..ee!)? Please please please... ROLFIE! Don't go! WAAH! Don't leave me!! ME sad...me very very sad! *gives Rolfe super big hug* WAAH! Thanks for that dafodil. Are you broke or something, why always give one stalk only? hehehe =P "Bel washing and hanging up clothes on a line in a house with a white picket fence and Rolfe coming home from work and hugging their little kiddies" WoW! What a nice thought! but nah, me having kids? man, that'll be the day! Oh well, once again...BYE ROLFIE! *waves to Rolfe like there's no tomorrow* BYE BYE! (Rolfe's out of sight) Bel:Phew...he's finally gone. no need to two-time anymore... =P You Rock Kixie the Cow! |
| Annah A-bomb 2004-12-16 ch 25, | abuseAh! How sweet! |
| gawkalot 2004-12-16 ch 35, anon. | abuseaw...sweet! he gave u hitler's knees. that was such a bitter-sweet moment. u better give me any guy man! |