...CONRAD?!

you changed your penname! wasn't it...Erik something? but dude, you've got some majorly awesome taste for names. Erik first (which is like...the most awesome name in the universe -- for guys) and then Landon (which is the second most awesmoe name in the universe). A Walk to Remember anyone? *grins* Yeah, Landon is an awesome name.

I think I use the word awesome a tad too much...

ANYWAY, great poem! i really liked it. Your writing has definitely improved from before (not that it was bad before). I really liked how some of it rhymed and some of it didn't -- everything flowed nicely.

write more!

-annie-