Reviews for Comeback Jack - FictionPress.com

Hope's Demise 2005-08-12 ch 4,	abusemy goodness, this is...different.this is just weird and cool and funny.wow...I hope it does get published, I'd buy it.
sonata luna 2004-12-29 ch 2,	abuseI liked this chapter as well. It makes me very thankful I don't live in that world though. Also, I must say, I love the stab at Leo diCaprio ... that was nice to see... anyway, I hope this novel of your does well... if it does get published, let me know the details, and if I have money at the time maybe I'll buy it.
sonata luna 2004-12-29 ch 1,	abuseI like it so far, it's very engaging. It certainly has this edge of realism. What bothers me is this, it starts off almost as if it could be some sort of fairy tale or adventure, but then begins to develop into a full fledged story, and then becomes that adventure again. The specific thing that was bothering me was they were there having this conversation with their son about his behavior... not exactly an all too alien situation, and then all of a sudden he's like "I should go to hollywood" & they're like "You're right" ... I think you should develop his character as an actor a bit more first, or maybe show that his parents have given it thought & completely given up and are ready to go along w/ anything semi-reasonable at this pt... otherwise good job though. Its nice to actually see something good on FP for once.