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Reviews For: Of Battering Rams and Magic: Azurena's Plight

Opal Soul
2001-07-10
ch 1,
abuseHey, is this the first chapter to a long series? It should be, I feel really bad for Azurena. Seems to be very original. Like someone else said, some wordings were a little awkward, but all in all, I could picture everything, and I'm curious as to what's going to happen next! Thanks for the review, by the way! ^_~ Keep writing!
Valerian
2001-01-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseSome of your wording is a bit strange but I like your story. Hope you keep going :)
Firespark
2001-01-13
ch 1,
abuseI like this, I want to read more of it soon please!
Star
2001-01-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh wow! That's great!
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