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| Opal Soul 2001-07-10 ch 1, | abuseHey, is this the first chapter to a long series? It should be, I feel really bad for Azurena. Seems to be very original. Like someone else said, some wordings were a little awkward, but all in all, I could picture everything, and I'm curious as to what's going to happen next! Thanks for the review, by the way! ^_~ Keep writing! |
| Valerian 2001-01-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseSome of your wording is a bit strange but I like your story. Hope you keep going :) |
| Firespark 2001-01-13 ch 1, | abuseI like this, I want to read more of it soon please! |
| Star 2001-01-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh wow! That's great! |