aw ! Now I feel really bad about all my old dolls that are all stored away in the attic !

Oh just want you to know that the revised chapter of 8 is up .

Hey, great poem. I'd love to be able to critique this... but as it is - I'm not very knowledgable in the ways of poetry... I just enjoy them =] ... especially this one! This one was great! The mood was perfect and the childishness of it was awesomely done.

That was so cute! I adore this poem, it going on my favorite stories. I have no critique. Adorable, keep up the good work!

I imagine that this is what dolls would feel to be abandoned, if they had the ability to feel. I like the use of rhyming throughout the poem. It didn't sound forced. Great poem.

Wow...if I had a doll I imagine it would be a little more critical (at least you stopped lighting my hair on fire/or choking me with bits of piano wire).

haha seriously though, the point of view is really good, as is the imagery. a most enjoyable read.

Aw, if a doll had feelings, this would probably match them entirely. I really like the way you wrote this one!

aww, that was sad.-Fine_with_me