 biminator 2005-01-09 . chapter 2nice, very nice. Onto Darkness stalking! |
 Syluna 2004-11-04 . chapter 2 A rotting potatoe smells ten times worse than a rotting piece of meat. Meat has almost a sweet smell to it, veggies just smell... bad.
Run ons...
Like you stub your toe, or jam your wrist, and for no apparent reason, you shake the living daylights out of it, whether it's ever helped or not. It might even make an injury worse, if it's a break or a sprain.
Half-dimentional? I want to know how that works..
How closed of our dear Alexan, assuming he is of a breed he's already heard of, or a combination therof.
YES! Yes yes yes! I love that little comment near the end.. ha ha ha Ha!
This is very.. precisely termed. Hes so elegant! Noble, like he know he deserves the most creme de la creme, and he's ** he doesn't have it. |
 Syluna 2004-11-04 . chapter 2 A rotting potatoe smells ten times worse than a rotting piece of meat. Meat has almost a sweet smell to it, veggies just smell... bad.
Run ons...
Like you stub your toe, or jam your wrist, and for no apparent reason, you shake the living daylights out of it, whether it's ever helped or not. It might even make an injury worse, if it's a break or a sprain.
Half-dimentional? I want to know how that works..
How closed of our dear Alexan, assuming he is of a breed he's already heard of, or a combination therof.
YES! Yes yes yes! I love that little comment near the end.. ha ha ha Ha!
This is very.. precisely termed. Hes so elegant! Noble, like he know he deserves the most creme de la creme, and he's ** he doesn't have it. |
 Dayla 2004-11-02 . chapter 2 There is nothing wrong with more mothboys. We need more of them; they are a very endangered creature in fiction. |
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