Reviews for Book of Whispers Part 1

Reviews For: Book of Whispers Part 1

Uncle-Al2 2005-03-12 ch 10,	abuseVery cool story with a great premise. I like the allegory Terra / Chaos. Somehow Bladewing needs to be neutralized (I assume in part II)!The characterization is strong and very consistent. I would have expected more awe from the common folk when Morghan recounted her adventures with the Gods. Also the encounter with Celo left a lot of questions. Final dust prophetic or possibility? Strange how Morgahn assumes she cannot love, just because she has problems trusting. Morgahn and Listhan are a couple in everything but name already. Great story, I'm off to read more! Thanks for sharing! Al
Dreaming of Disillusionment 2005-02-19 ch 1,	abuseI've liked it so far. I can't wait to get to the next book. I find it odd that you don't have many reviews when the stories are pretty solid and well written. I also don't know why in your bio/main page area you apologize for writing in the third person. I know that many (most) of the works on fictionpress seem to usually come in a first person view, usually containing mostly dialogue and nothing else. I find it more enjoyable to read a story the way you have it setup. A lot can be said with the objects and feelings in a room without a word being said. Only thing that I found wanting in the story were how you phrased things at times, but it was minor and easily overlooked. I am liking it so far :)
Starknight 2005-01-17 ch 1,	abuseHmm... you know you have no favorites (authors/stories)? You should put some in there, it's a great way to make friends... Anyway, I like the way it starts off. The jello bit was pretty funny. My recommendation would be to put extra spaces between your paragraphs to make it easier to read on fictionpress...
unthinkable 2004-12-04 ch 10,	abuseI love your story!! i couldn't stop reading it. now off to read the next tale.

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