Overall quite good.
Very nice idea, and it has an almost Suessian feel to it. Very driving rythym, very similar to some of his ideas. I like it.
The only thing I'd say is that it doesn't have your usual flair for subtle rhyme, and some of them, Folk and Yolk being the most obvious, feel almost forced...
As I said, overall quite good.

just... wow. beautifully written psycho. really enjoyed this alot. Very smooth, interesting, and all around... moving.