Gorgeous. The descriptions are beautfully done. You kick my poem, "Fire Bird", to the ground. I'm completely awed by this poem.

oh my.
it's beautiful.
i'm favouriting this for sure.
it's a beautiful, breathtaking description,
and the imagery is divine.
it's lovely, lovely, lovely and just that.
i can feel the warmth,
experience the glow,
and your poetry is almost tangible.
you're reallyreally talented.
keep this up!
-kismet.

Awesome use of imagry, keep writing!