  gnomeish 2006-03-06 . chapter 3 once again... a not quite so threatening letter... write the next chapter or else... or else... something or other... Ha got you good! |
| g nome 2006-02-21 . chapter 3 more mildly threating comments...I AM A BANANA! |
| mr mushroom man 2006-02-06 . chapter 3 where is the next chapter? do i have to poke you to death? just do it and nobody will get hurt (cept maybe tanya) :) -signed terribly bored |
  William Shield 2005-10-23 . chapter 3ola! where is the rest? im on the edge ofmy seat here! come on! dont leave me hanging! ... i blame alex... |
 Phantom Of Time 2005-04-04 . chapter 3Very nice. The storyline continues to elaborate, which keeps attention (it kept mine =D!). Good job Zeph, and keep it up! |
 Deaths Deciples 2005-04-02 . chapter 3wow, great job, well written lotsa description, keep it up, im expecting a chapter per month =P, so lets go! |
| Phantom Of Time 2005-03-31 . chapter 2 Nice start to what's shaping up to be a great story. I'm looking forward to more of this one (to say the least =D). Keep it up, you're doing great! |
 Shadow On The Sun 2005-02-06 . chapter 1not bad stephy, keep writting :) |
| Deaths Deciples 2005-01-06 . chapter 2 wow, great story, i read chapter one awhile ago, and i was happy to see that there was a chapter 2 i could start to enjoy, great description and new names in the story compared to reality books where every name is the same |
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