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| ADSpencer 2006-06-20 ch 6,  | abuseOh, poor kitten...He now reminds me of my little orange cat, Aslan. lol. Anyhow, I'm still loving the Egyptian influence. |
| ADSpencer 2006-06-20 ch 5, | abuseGreat chapter! I'm still loving this. |
| ADSpencer 2006-06-20 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter. Cussing kitty...lol. That was amusing. Nice work. |
| ADSpencer 2006-05-22 ch 3, | abuseInteresting! Great chapter. I'm very interested in Captain Jenkins. |
| ADSpencer 2006-05-09 ch 2, | abuseThis chapter was great! Nice work. Gave me the shivers (and not in a 'shiver me timbers' kind of way). |
| ADSpencer 2006-05-09 ch 1, | abuseWhat can I say. . .This story is awesome. I first clicked on it because I had came up with a story about a cat, and I wanted to know how other people viewed a cat's perspective. You're story is terrific! The characters are awesome, the plot is already developing, and the setting is lazily put in with graceful tidbits. This is so going on my favorites. |
| mushroom-hunter-d 2005-04-16 ch 6, | abuseThis is...wow. Awesome. You've done your research and it shows. And gingerhead is adorable. -[) |
| aims80 2005-01-09 ch 6, | abuseVery cute. :) |
| Fiery Secrets of My Heart 2004-12-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is a really good intro. I love your characters! Some are cats, some are people. Some have breif parts, some lengthy. But my favorite is Ol'Ma. She's SO COOL! So is her description. You didn't really say much about where they were, but it wasn't even a problem because he's leaving. I love it. You're really good at writing. Keep writing! |
| Amethyst Skyes 2004-11-30 ch 6, | abuseI enjoyed this story very much. The details are very colorful, and combined with research make each scene very vivid. Your wording is also very good; not too ornate, not too simple. Basically, I like the story. A lot(especially since I like cats). =] |
| nathalsa 2004-08-09 ch 6, | abused00d. I'm FASCINATED. I can't wait to read more-- this is wonderful, well-written, and with a very definite and intriguing voice. Je s'aime! |
| Mina Skywalker 2004-08-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is AWESOME! I love how you make the POV that of a cat! That is extremely creative! I love it! You have a strong understanding of writing horror, along with you knowledge of Egyptian mythology. Very well written. I'm adding you to my favorite author page right now! I know you love reviewing so I was hoping you could review my story The Violin! I'd be honored if you would take the time to, because you are currently my new writing role model! Thank you for writing such a wonderfully enjoyable piece! Write on-! |
| Khenna 2004-07-16 ch 6, anon. | abuseI don't think you're conintuing this story any further, or at least you haven't updated in a while. I would like an update though, this story is very interesting, I would like to know where it is going from here. |
| Khenna 2004-07-14 ch 5, anon. | abuseVery interesint thing you have going on here. Trying to figure out where this is all going... |
| Khenna 2004-07-13 ch 4, anon. | abuseSpooky, there is something going on... |