this is an outstanding story and i can not wait to read the next,

This is one of my favorite stories that I have read by Whitewitch. It has the perfect elements of a good story. It has conclit, drama, action, and suspense. Hurry up and start on chapter 2! It could be longer though, but not too long because then it could lose the heart and the flavor of the story. The usuage of words and the elemnets of language fits for the story. Great job, make more,

"Why ask why when why is always why? Why?"

Well...this is severly creepy too. I Finally read it...

Nice chica, definately continue!

interesting story, looking forward to more, dont let it be the end yet. THis can go a LOT further if you wish.